I love his face!

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VeiKa

Don't be so hard on yourself, you did a nice job and it's much better than my attempts at coloring.

Here's the critique part ((in other words feel free to ignore this part))

There are two strands of hair that don't look quite right. They're the ones by his ear and touch or almost touch the collar. They don't have a definate outline like the rest of his hair. Other than that the hair is colored beautifully.

The background is lovely and the rest of his clothes are drawn and detailed well but I don't think the colors work together. There is not much I can tell you to help because I pretty much suck at color combinations, but if you choose more neutral colors, a brighter color will stand out more. Useing more neutral tones ((black, white, tan)) can also help with the shadeing too. You can also diffrent shades and hues of one color for the same effect. Too much color tends to make things look all over the place ((there are some exceptions and some people are really good at makeing bright colors work)).

Thanks for reading my long comment, feel free to ignore my critique. It's here to help not insult so please don't take it personally.

keito =3

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you seem to be right on the path to greatness, this is a sweet pic I love how you did that with the hair and eyes. the patturn on the clothing is superb as well! ^^

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Thank you very much for the tips. I can say the same as you about his neck. Now that I see it finished and "in cool", the curve shouldn't be that way but more straight. Thanks for helping me see it ^^

Thanks a lot for the reference pic, too. I'll keep that in mind for upcoming pictures. I know about the outline to be very wide even if I use a 0'05mm outliner, but I just don't know what to do to make the outlines thinner. Anyways, I appreciate a lot your critique nd your fave!! Thanks!!

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*Nuk*

If I encourage advanced critique is because I just *need* to read critiques and tips from my visitors, so I like to read everything they leave to me ^^

I know about the hair strands, but sometimes I think that a "silky" effect would be neat, but I can see some odd thingies there ase you stated. Thanks for letting me know.

I've been told a lot of times that the colors work well together, and I think they do as I've seen lots of combinations with these colours, and so I saw them in movies like LOTR ^^

About the background, I tried to make something like a japanese wallpaper, but maybe there are some blurry branches that may seem like a not-so-real background. I suck at backgrounds, so I make them as simple as possible to save up some work and madness xDDD

Thanks for everything!

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Wow! The color and expression is so vivid! I really like it!

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Very nice.

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dios matame! que hombre tan bello! me lo lleve a favs XD lo que me sorprendio a demas de tu estilo de dibujo que es hermoso es el estampado de florecitas o,o con que programa lo hiciste? o ya tenias hechas las estampas XD ?

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Pues las flores son un pincel de Photoshop que yo misma creé basándome en el diseño real que aparece en mi móvil. Las flores no son invención mía, son un diseño de Nokia para su colección de móviles L'Amour Collection. Las flores son vectoriales, creadas con la herramienta "pluma" o "pen" del Photoshop. Se guarda la imagen con un formato .png y se convierte a pincel en el menú "edición".

Muchas gracias por tu comentario y tu favorito!! ^^

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ahhh XD si bueno si sabia que asi se hacia pero o,o es que se ven bien bonitasssss TToTT el chico esta bien guapo, gracias por darme la idea XD no se me habia ocurrido hacer eso en verdad XD

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